Float Away — A ghazal in honor of National Poetry Month
Posted: April 26, 2012 Filed under: On writing | Tags: College of Mount St. Joseph, ghazal, Jeffrey Hillard, National Poetry Month, poetry, RED!webzine, writing 13 Comments »While in college the second time, this time for an English degree, I took several creative writing courses from Jeffrey S. Hillard, a professor who was an excellent poet and writer, and also was well-loved by the students. After graduating, I worked with Jeff on web editing RED!webzine, a publication Jeff initially started to share stories of transformation in the lives of prisoners and individuals reentering society and of innovations making it happen.
Jeff is an excellent poet and recently won a poetry contest sponsored by the Cincinnati Public Library. I wrote the following poem in Jeff’s Poetry class at the College of Mount St. Joseph in 2004.
I post it here in honor of National Poetry Month.
03.25.04
Float AwayWhite airy puff balls leave flower stems to float away Squirrels and rabbits scramble for food, a spider clings to a twig. Fresh sprouts shoot up, a delicate green mist covers the wood. A breeze of warm air carries whispered voices of I plant a seed in the rich black soil of the earth and watch A cricket chirps and so do the restless birds |
For more about the ghazal poetic form see Poets.org.


Very nice, Christine!!! You are so talented!! Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for visiting Beth Ann.
Sure!!!
Excellent ghazal! I’d never heard of this form until about a year ago and love it.
Thanks, Susan. I don’t even remember the rules, but when I went back and looked at the link again, it made me think that perhaps I hadn’t followed them all that well. I’m thinking about trying this again.
Lovely poem, Christine.
Hugs,
Kathy
Thanks, Kathy. And a big hug to you for all those you give away.
Going to check that out, I like the style, and what it says.
Maybe I’ll see a ghazal on your blog one of these days. . .
That’s a nice poem!
Thanks, William. I don’t write a lot of poetry, but would like to.
Beautiful.
Thanks, Robin.