Float Away — A ghazal in honor of National Poetry Month

While in college the second time, this time for an English degree, I took several creative writing courses from Jeffrey S. Hillard, a professor who was an excellent poet and writer, and also was well-loved by the students. After graduating, I worked with Jeff on web editing RED!webzine, a publication Jeff initially started to share stories of transformation in the lives of prisoners and individuals reentering society and of innovations making it happen.

Jeff is an excellent poet and recently won a poetry contest sponsored by the Cincinnati Public Library. I wrote the following poem in Jeff’s Poetry class at the College of Mount St. Joseph in 2004.

I post it here in honor of National Poetry Month.

03.25.04

Float Away

White airy puff balls leave flower stems to float away
over grass where I lie and watch how clouds do float away.

Squirrels and rabbits scramble for food, a spider clings to a twig.
Geese, like an arrow, in the sky slice through, float away.

Fresh sprouts shoot up, a delicate green mist covers the wood.
Fragrances of jonquils and hyacinths wrapped in blue float away.

A breeze of warm air carries whispered voices of
mothers, sisters, friends, lovers, who float away.

I plant a seed in the rich black soil of the earth and watch
as the children born from my womb float away.

A cricket chirps and so do the restless birds
who chatter of morning but soon float away.

For more about the ghazal poetic form see Poets.org.

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13 Comments on “Float Away — A ghazal in honor of National Poetry Month”

  1. Beth Ann says:

    Very nice, Christine!!! You are so talented!! Thanks for sharing!

  2. suzicate says:

    Excellent ghazal! I’d never heard of this form until about a year ago and love it.

    • CMSmith says:

      Thanks, Susan. I don’t even remember the rules, but when I went back and looked at the link again, it made me think that perhaps I hadn’t followed them all that well. I’m thinking about trying this again.

  3. Lovely poem, Christine.
    Hugs,
    Kathy

  4. pattisj says:

    Going to check that out, I like the style, and what it says.

  5. That’s a nice poem!

  6. Robin says:

    Beautiful. :)


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